I think you're drawing your foreheads to long, and having the hair end too high up. Also, your lines should be done with the pen, because it looks a lot better than a pencil line softened. The background is very nice.

technical arn't u.. well i cant really help the way i draw.. its just a habit and habits are hard to change.. anyway thanks for the comments

well, you've changed the way you drew from when you were little, no? It's not changing your style, but improving your basic drawing skills.

hmm... that's true, i can see my improvment when i go through my user board.

This is very nice. I like the soft colors, its very pretty