I agree, you should put more effort into and spend more time on your pictures. I'm sure this could be better if you shaded a bit more, added more detail (folds in the clothes, fingers, toes, etc.) and added a background. :)
By the way, I did that on purpose. I didn't want to do another one today. I finished my Genis bust and I'm done for the day, that's why I did that. It's funny because it looks so bad! ^_^
drawn in 10 min