ROFL. This deserves to go into the "trash" board. Honestly, what were you think when you put this on here? "Uh, duhh err, I think I will go post crap on the advance board just so I can get a lovell comments from everyone :B"
An easy way to assess the level of your work is to simply look at the other works on that board. Take a look at the picture just below yours, does this look anything like that?
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