Hnn... I think that if you had put a tad bit more time and effort into this piece, you would have achieved a better result... For example, the coloring of the figure really needs work... you didnt even color within the lines, and there is no shading to speak of (the random dark grey stuff on the head doesnt count...)Also, the lineart itself is messy and ill executed... the shapes are there, but the lines need to be refined.... lastly, the background, although kind of cool, could have been a tad bit more complex... Oh well... Try harder next time, please :|