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rosalyn (Apr 20, 2003)
When he reached Roe?s house, all he could see was people carrying out boxes of stuff out of her home. Then he noticed Roe on her lawn leaning against her big pine tree.
?Roe what is going on?? Matt asked in a calm voice so not to upset her.
?Matt? Something happened back home,? Roe began to explain,? I?m leaving and I don?t know how long. My father said it would be very hard to come back. I won?t be able to see you ever again??
?This is messed up? Why? I need you Roe. You are the only friend I?ve had, ever.? said Matt with tears in his eyes. They hugged each other and cried. Roe?s dad honked the car horn and called for Roe.
?Roselyn, we are going be late for our plane!?
?I guess this is good-bye? I?ll miss you Matt. Just, no matters what happens, don?t forget me.?
?I will never forget you Roe.?
Matt and Roe hugged each other one last time then Roe turned around and headed towards the car. Matt slumped his heart broken body on the pine tree and watched.
?Matt!? Roe yelled running towards him.
They grabbed each others hands and kissed. All the memories of what they?ve done together spilt over Matt?s mind. He looked on as the person he cared about more than ever left his life forever.
?I will never forget you Roe?? Matt cried in his arms.

This is a scene from a book not yet published. It is about a boy the age of 15 who finds himself and the love inside his heart. What do you think?
rosalyn (Apr 20, 2003)
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marcello (edited Apr 21, 2003)
sounds good, way too mushy for my tastes though.
Nice picture but the white glitching on some of the lines bugs me. Not hard to fix.
rosalyn (edited Apr 21, 2003)
The book is not really mushy at all It is just this one part in the book I am aspecially fond over. Sorry the part of the book I chose was so long. I just wanted people to understand where I got my Screen name from.
Turtlebuster (edited Apr 22, 2003)
i know. you wanted people to understand how much you love the emotion.
I almost wish i could.
CessaJ13 (edited Apr 23, 2003)
awwwwwwwww. i like the story line, so romantic.
Balrog (edited Apr 23, 2003)
Makes me cry :(
Good Job ;D!
darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)
nice pic.... good story too... but dont think im one for mushy romances;)
rosalyn (edited Jul 6, 2003)
I like it! I like romance! XP
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