I think it might be the grid pattern that's bothering you. Well it's bothering me anyways. Also there's a few parts you didn't shade such as under the breasts (heehee I said parts). Besides that though I think it's looking good. I like how at the top of her head the shine almost forms a star, which matches the personality she's showing.
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