You thought right. Toon versions are fun....and you have skill to make this kinds of toons look good. I think that your writing could of been better but It's hard to write like that so. You did a very good job.

Yeah, my lettering does kinda suck.

HAH... yeah cartoon captions are always done in perfect calligraphy and stuff. Whatevah.

The large areas of solid black are very tastey looking. I want to roll around on them. Also the use of pure white and black on the two characters contrasted with the greys behind them helps to bring them forward in the image very nicely.

who gives a crap about the lettering, it's legible... now the guy has to say.... well what the hell do you want it for?

lol, you=clever

...i dont think she "borrowing" the money Lori...lol awesome as always axil O)

chya... bangs head on desk...