So quickly? O_o I think that I only pratice in the paper... And in Photoshop... I think it got worse than my other draw, 'cuz my mouse was destroyed >< and the mouse I'm using is a old ball one... I know that soon you'll be drawing in the Intermediate! ^^

I love the hair and eyes! Wow! Such shiny beauitfulness if that makes sense. But some things just kinda look strange like the foreheads a bit big lookin, and the lines just looks so light and small, it's sorta weird compared to the rest of the picture. Thicker black lines, no outline, or outlining with the colour of the part you're outlining would look better. I hope you understood that last part xD