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pulmonq2 (Feb 21, 2005)
drawn in 35 min

Kenshin (Feb 21, 2005)

w3wt for halftones! XD I really like her expression :D I know her shoulder is up, but her arm still appears a little short. I like this picture, though

pulmonq2 (edited Feb 21, 2005)

her upper arm is raised behind her a bit. And yea, I've always been a pencil person, so this is more in my style. XD

btw, I got the inspiration for this from you :P

Kenshin (Feb 21, 2005)

^^ Yay! XD I inspired somebody!

pulmonq2 (Feb 21, 2005)

"whee!" ^^

pulmonq2 (Feb 22, 2005)
drawn in 29 min

pulmonq2 (Feb 22, 2005)
drawn in 19 min

hehe ^^

taori (Feb 22, 2005)

ya know... that body is awesome. like, the way the pants sit on her hips, and how the halftones work around her breasts... something is very pleasing about that. the face makes me angry, but that's just me.

pulmonq2 (Feb 22, 2005)

Her face could use a bit of smoothing, I concur --around her cheeks anyway. The overall image is supposed to be kinda sketchy, but a smoother face would be a good thing I think.

pulmonq2 (Mar 1, 2005)
drawn in 8 min

Kink (Mar 1, 2005)

You did a nice job on proportions with the body, but the hand could use some work, overall a nice job of using halftones though. A nice picture.

Orkdoop (Mar 1, 2005)

what are halftones?

pulmonq2 (edited Mar 1, 2005)

Speak for yourself kink (referring to unparalleled) :P

Halftones are those areas shaded by using tiny dots close together.

Zack (edited Mar 1, 2005)

Always so defensive. Must someone be perfect before they can give a critique? The hand seems small.

Kink (Mar 1, 2005)

Hey! Ouch pulmong2, I know I need work too, but you could have left a post of that nature on MY PICTURE!

pulmonq2 (Mar 1, 2005)

It kinda annoys me when ppl say "this could use work" but don't say in what way, cause that just leaves me going "um, ok?"

Kink (Mar 1, 2005)

Ok, sorry, wrong "lack of" choice of words. But yea, the hand dose seem a bit small, too small for just being further back than the body.

pulmonq2 (edited Mar 1, 2005)

Actually if ppl bother to measure, it's just about the right size of 1.68 ration to the forearm.

Kink (Mar 1, 2005)

Then the fingers are too short for that kind of rotation. Sorry but its the only part of your picture that draws my eye to it being "off".

nozomii (Mar 1, 2005)

looks pretty good to me

concannon (Mar 1, 2005)

Eh, people, I wouldn't get into an argument over anatomy. Cause honestly, there are millions of little things that you could nitpick over in hundreds of pictures.

However, the hand is off. It's simply too small. Unless, of course, you were trying to make it look as if it were farther behind her. In which case, her forearm would be too long, because you have to the the foreshortening (or in this case, backshortening?) right. Also, it looks like she has a hunchback. Her right shoulder (our left) is raised too high, so it gives the appearance of something trying to force it's way out of her shirt. (A third boob?)

Okay, that's my two cents. I could get into tiny details, but those are the big things that are bugging me.

Kink (Mar 1, 2005)

YES! *pumps hand into air, then does a victory dance* (Just kidding. That was sorta fun though.)

pulmonq2 (Mar 2, 2005)
drawn in 41 min

pulmonq2 (Mar 2, 2005)
drawn in 15 min

Cordelia_Pink (Mar 3, 2005)

You made the background look more pizzazz in a way that it looks like the wallpaper in my living room. lol

pulmonq2 (edited Mar 6, 2005)

It's because I'm psychic. ^^

Truearashi (May 17, 2005)

this IS a great pic' though the hand is a little off
... the wallpaper kick ass ^.^

Noremac (May 17, 2005)

that is the sexiest yo-yo i have ever seen