I tend to like pictures with a story to them, or ones that the view can make their own story. It took me a few moments to notice the Galubrioloids there and that gives a cool effect to me of being able to more closely relate to the character who also thought they were there but wasn't about to clearly see them himself. Maybe I just don't pick up on certain details as quickly though. Great concept though, you're actually starting to give me all sorts of ideas of what I might do for my next picture.