That's pretty good. I like the blue fade of the things inside the cockpit and the glare on the glass/space age material/whatever. Only thing that seems off to me is that the missle launcher in the bottom right corner is turned up toward the viewer. If it were facing forward then it'd look more like an oval at a tilted angle and wouldn't be such a round circle. Nice job though I do like this picture a lot.
Whoops... that was one of the things I was meant to fix between version 1 and 2. I was feeling lazy when I did the line work and so just used the oval tool to work bits out. Ah well... I'm too lazy to fix it now too.
drawn in 22 min
drawn in 27 min
Oh, and I used a tablet to draw this...not that it really shows.