I like the overall feel of the picture, but there are a few things wrong with it. First of all there is some white still on the picture, and unless I am mistaken they aren't supposed to be there. And another thing. If the person is bruised all over their chest area (like the shirt and stuff) woudn't there be some like dirt or something, or more marks on the shirt? And maybe a little bit of shading or light in the hair instead of just having that one solid color. Hair isn't just one color, there are many! But it is pretty good.