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drawn in 32 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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Creepy_Pooch
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Creepy_Pooch (Dec 18, 2004)
^^ It's my pet on neopets, Tory881 ^^ er... in a thunderstorm...
Creepy_Pooch (Dec 18, 2004)
drawn in 32 min
lilypad (Dec 21, 2004)
(this is soccer monkey speaking...)
this is really good! I like the bg, the storm clouds, and the lightning, they are all perfect(for now)...

but there are a few things about Tory that are bothering me...
(i used to make all these mistakes myself, so don't worry, you'll grow out of it.)
1)try to use layers. I watched the animation and when you were making the grass, it seemed to acidentilly go over Tory's foot.
2)don't use the fill tool a lot. The mods don't usually like that, and will delete your pics if they all have a bunch of fill tool going on. (trust me, I know.)
3)try shading. You don't have to use shading right away, but it's a good idea if you want to get better.

i know childlike_vampire has a pic demonstrating layers.
and I don't have the link on me, but mazi also has some great tutorials to look at.

Overall, I think this is great!
^^
(ps-YAHIKO!!!)
Creepy_Pooch (edited Dec 23, 2004)
-_- dude, 1) I JUST STARTED
2) This place is confusing enough
3) GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
4)I only used fill once
5)I'm horrible a computer art and NOT EVERYONE IS ALL THAT GREAT AT DRAWING!
P.S. SANO!!!
lilypad (Dec 26, 2004)
creepy...
1)I know what it's like to be new, I was once, too, just giving you some tips for you to improve...
2)I know it's confusing, that's why I usually look like @.@ this after an hour or two on 2Draw.
3)Yes, I know that you hate me now.(and that you still are mad at me for telling you-know-who)
4)I know that you only used fill once, but the mods tend to not like it...trying to save you a few points, is all.
5)I suck at computer art, too!! You may want to save up for a tablet if you suck with a mouse. And I know not everyone is good at drawing, although if you want to make it on 2Draw you should do a lot of practicing.

You do have to notice that I said over all this is a great pic.

Chill, Creepy.
((YAHIKO!!!))
Cacau (Dec 26, 2004)
The BG is very cool, anyways. Try to use layers. And Tory is very cute, try some shading.
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