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Nightmare (edited Dec 9, 2004)
To sit in solem silence
On a dull dark dock In a pestilential prison with a life long lock Awaiting the sensation of a short sharp shock From a cheap and chippy Chopper On a big black block. Yea, poetry and a tounge-twister at the same time. |
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seaanemone (Dec 9, 2004)
awesome! :D
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Kilala (Dec 9, 2004)
Wow that's deep...
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inatyrb (Dec 9, 2004)
dude... i love it! it makes me want to write a poem, but i get depressed when i write... heh'
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Zack (Dec 9, 2004)
Hah, France's proudest invention. I like this, it's clever. The rhymed sound is very appropriate, matches the action described.
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Xodiak (edited Dec 9, 2004)
This poem is like a mental orgasm. <:)
You should add to the poem (not really) the phrase: "Listening to an old clock making tik-tak-tok!" |XOD| |
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spiritdweller (Dec 9, 2004)
very cool nightmare...
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sincity (Dec 9, 2004)
? You go to readings nightmare? I like poetry, but don't seem to read enough of it.
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Nightmare (Dec 10, 2004)
No...made it up off the top of my head.
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seaanemone (Dec 10, 2004)
that's awesome! :P i always have to go thru a few verses in my head to see if i can turn it in to a poem... it takes me forever... :D
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emmamommalag (Dec 10, 2004)
Yep, that's cool. :)
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seaanemone (edited Dec 10, 2004)
i tried to say it really fast and i said "big back bock" XD
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Xodiak (Dec 10, 2004)
I said a "big black cock...roach." <:)
|XOD| |
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seaanemone (Dec 11, 2004)
:D ^__^ :P
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marcello (Dec 11, 2004)
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Nightmare (Dec 11, 2004)
haha..good one Cello. I seem to admire this 'Appleton' and 'Big Black Cock'.
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Ty854 (Dec 22, 2004)
lmfao. That Appleton thing is hilarious. Night mare, great poem. Do more!
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squee (Dec 22, 2004)
Wow.. that reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven... in an odd way.
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Excel_Ichigo (Jan 9, 2005)
Hey! You're that one person I talked to a while back!
Right, anyway. Yep. It's definitely a poem. *pokes* |
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StrawberryYamichan (Jan 9, 2005)
dude that was damn good.
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