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Majikoopa (Dec 2, 2004)

Tried to expirement with light and texture. Going for a salamander look. I may take it off later, but I would like some feedback and tips. It would be especially nice if you could look at the animation and see what I could do differently.

CRITIQUE STRONGLY ENCOURAGED!!!

Majikoopa (Dec 2, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour

me007 (Dec 2, 2004)

hey your gettin a lot better with the applet. The lighting is really comming along and you are getting really good at shading. the only thing I can qritique is maybe sharpen some stuff up.. maybe use a little bolder colors, though even those turned out well.. Good job :)

monkeyyoung (Dec 3, 2004)

umm it looks like a turtle oh well close enough nice shdaing

Majikoopa (edited Dec 3, 2004)

Make sure that you dont have your computer too dark while you look at this one. Turn up the brightness and it looks a lot better. Just realized that my comp is like pretty bright :)

aleusha (edited Dec 5, 2004)

yeah, looking at this 4 the 2nd time on a brighter computer, and it's heaps clearer with the lumpy scale plate bits and stuff more defined. kinda interesting, i dig the colours and the rough painty-ness, would be cool to see the rest of its body too i reckon. kinda hard with such little space though. is that its tongue? koolism ~*~

Majikoopa (Jan 8, 2005)

thanks... I will draw the full body some time. No, that is his lower lip

Majikoopa (Jan 8, 2005)
drawn in 8 min

I added the symbol