I hate to say it, but this isnt intermediate quality at all... you guys should have done this on the beginners board and then commenced the collab... the facial anatomy is completely disproportionate, her breasts are not in the proper places (also not balanced in size or shape), the legs are not very well defined (meaning that the left[viewers right] leg is ok, but the right[viewers left] is just a blob...), the tail looks as if it was drawn with the line tool, the left[viewers right] arm is anatomically incorrect (the bottom of the arm also comes in at the wrong place), and lastly, the upper chest area below the (nonexistant) neck and above the breasts is not wide enough and is too sharply sloped... Oh... the hand anatomy could use some work as well <:P I dont mean to be cruel, but these are the things that should be done to improve the picture...
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