humm.. if you dont mind me critting.. (( cause finally a great pictuer >O )), where the legs join the waist/hips, it could be a bit rounded? if for you to experiment ^^ and the eyes, should they not have eye whites? ?_?
its all i can think of cause im tired.. no worries i do lots of mistakes in my picture lol
Nnh.. Mai claims she has a flat chest.. I said I have a flatter chest than she does.. And now we're fighting over who has the flatte chest. And I'm winning. >:]
As far as the eyes go, I purposily made them skin colored so the white shine would stand out more. The hips? Well.. I don't know. I had people shouting at me that I made her look fat in the picture. e__e; Puh.
*sigh* i wasnt going to say anything because i really hate it when people are mean to young ones..and i have no idea how old you are chiritsu, but seriously, you should look at someones gallery to get an idea of their skill before opening your hole on a piece like this. i think you should also prove via drawings that you know what the hell you are talking about. which looking at your works thusfar, i dont think you do. its really great to have an opinion and all, but respect that hakkai is skilled as hell.
nice boobs :)
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its all i can think of cause im tired.. no worries i do lots of mistakes in my picture lol
As far as the eyes go, I purposily made them skin colored so the white shine would stand out more. The hips? Well.. I don't know. I had people shouting at me that I made her look fat in the picture. e__e; Puh.
nice boobs :)