took forever to be able to submit this revision... kept losing my connection
hey, danny! add grapes and then I'll work on the leaves some more :D

hokey.. lol hardly hardly done on the grapes.. got an outline with chicken pocks so far :P so i will finish up after lunch

welp they are commin along.. I think.. the shape is a little bit off, but I will fix it as I go along and draw the grapse.. the leaves look fantastic btw! and they arnt even done :P

sorry i submited this so soon.. my internet is being crap tonight, the server keeps on going down and i dont wanna have it deleate the picture, so ill work on it in a few again, but this is more of a safety save Cindy, u can work on it a bit if you want

Danny, your grapes are absolutely perfect so far!!! This is so much fun :D
The revision I did here doesn't show up because I lost my connection during submission and it was that horrid little thumbnail x, but luckily Marcello is a doll and he got it back to the previous edit so at least we can continue to revise it. :) Thanks, Marcello.

Okay, actually stayed connected long enough to get something done. I took in the outline of your grapes just a tiny bit, (of course I realize you'll bring them out some again when you refine the shapes in finishing them) and repositioned the leaves a bit so that we could keep our composition intact. It works similar to an S composition, with the layout of the subject and the openings and points of light creating the flow. This way the viewers eye travels comfortably through the picture. I marked the openings and points of light so you know not to extend the grapes into those areas. Of course you'll delete the layer with this scribbling before you work on it. :D

well crap cindy im sorry.. i wanted to get more grapes done again.. im working with the outline too to refine it, but my dad is yellin at me to get ready lol we have a wedding to go to today.. hopefully i can get these done soon, but. i think i have a problem, I think i am making the grapes too small.. if you look at the ref, i start with them larger, but i didnt calculate in the fact that i would be shaving them down to round them and stuff.. i think they are comming out too small.. anyways. if that is the case im sorry, maybe there is something that im not doin right, and i didnt deleate your model btw, so i will folow that as well, it is just hidden.

ok..yay.. lol like a couple more.. but the letters are kinda screwin me up, but ill work around them.. sorry if the coloring is a bit off, but once i get all the grapes in and done i will come in and refine and match them up with eachother :)

Okay, Danny, your turn again. :)

hehe ok I will work on these tonight cause I dont have homework and we have to go pick the dog up from the vet from his surgery. and I will get more than 2 grapes done at a time lol.. THE LEAVES LOOK AWSOME....edit: OH.. i just saw what is wrong with the grape shap.. durr lol I need to cut more in on the right side.. like.. where the tail forms..if you look at the reference, it is not that fat. lol just a note to self when I work on it tonight

Well, I think I'm almost done on my end, just a couple of tiny things left to do. Your turn, now. :)

well I added a few more, ill go home now and maybe work on it a bit more. I donno, i just see so many things wrong with it :P I always do that GRRR, oh well, I will work out what i think is, like the lower grapes are getting brighter, just because I draw a little differently everyday, so it is weird, but I will try and impore it and then I will come back in a nd redefine each grape and stuff on the same day so that i have the same "drawing style" going lol so that it doesnt look horrably off, but I will work really hard to make it as great as i can :D and the leaves... are.. wowser.. lol you are unbelieveable Cindy :)

w00t! omg ok done with the tail.. now the cliff thingy looking mabober and then ill be done :)

I got a couple more grapes in.. tho some of them are commin in a little miss placed according to the picture.. I may come in and add a few randomly or move a few that i have done to fit the picture better

oops.. crap forgot to put the grapes back :P well i will in a few here on my next edit, but i had to move them down so i could see what i was doing on the top of them.. i have another hidden layer that i can realign the grapes up with so that i didnt lose its position so the same amout of leaf will be showing :)

20th version, 3mb.. lol breaking records all over the place W00t.. ok well im just taking a quick break and then i will come in and finish up the cliffy dilio so we can submit it :D

WOOHOO ok grapes are done, unless you want me to go in and like darken up the places around the grapes like for defanition.. but yeah.. YAY wow that was a pain in the ass :P

k sorry, had to tweek

AHHHH HELP I CANT... *twitch... Spazz* stooop....... TWEEEEKKING!! .. lol ok NOW.. NOW I am done.. forizzle.. I hope. yes I am.. done.. i fixed a couple of your grapes to help them blend a bit more but you migh wanna go in and just fix them a bit more to make them blent.. tho they kinda look cool now :) up to you

We did it! I didn't have to do much at all to finish it up... just had to take out a space in the background and work in the background grapes a bit more, but didn't do too much to them because I want them to stay in the background. My favorite part are your grapes with the highlights... just beautiful. And Danny I betcha if you look behind you, you'll be missing your butt because you worked yours right off on this. HAH :) Thanks for a wonderful time doing this... you are so talented and easy to work with and FUN. :)