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watermage248
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watermage248 (Mar 9, 2003)
Opinions opinions!! Im not quite sire whether this sucks or is ok so i neeeeeedddd opinions!
watermage248 (Mar 9, 2003)
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Ari (edited Mar 9, 2003)
It's a good start! Maybe if you cleaned up the coloring a bit and shaded it, it would look more realistic. Other than that, I like it!!!
Genkigirl7 (edited Mar 9, 2003)
LAY off of the mascara!
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Cienna (edited Mar 11, 2003)
yay! ^____^ it's really good cept you should try to use thinner lines!
Kazukie (edited Mar 11, 2003)
Is she pregnant?! I'd hope so..
ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)
Watermage, that's very beautiful. I love the chopsticks in her hair. =) They're so purty; I have a few sets of chopsticks at home myself.

This picture has a real lumberjack, hillbilly flavor. If that's what you were going for, then great! If not, then work on complimentary colors and body proportions. Also, a bit of her shirt is leaking into her arms, and her eyes are kind of bloody. =P

You might want to reduce the pixels of your line art a bit as well. Use a solid, 2 pixel (since it seems your comfortable with the thicker art). And line thickness variation around the face makes her seem 'very' chubby. Try again! I'm sure you'll do a great job. =)
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