I really like her yellow shirt. =) I don't have any yellow tanktops.. Or yellow anything. =\ So this is a good, original picture. I like what you're going for with the huge anime eyes. And the way you did the hair shows a good personal style.

You shouldn't, however, cut off a picture at the bottom like that. Why don't you move the picture down so that the bottom of the screen cuts off the picture rather than that distracting black line? You may need to work on your line art a bit --as well as body proportions. The usual comments, huh?