see now this is looking alittle better.. u should just experiment with the tools a bit more, play around with the applet to get a feel for it and then your pictures will come out even better, another thing you might wanna try is to not use such thick lines for everything, like use thinner lines for the things in the background and use thicker, but more detailed lines in the foreground.. hope that helps

Thanks. I added shadows, blurs, and shading. I was doing that so much I actully made the time limit!!!
BTW, I like thick lines, but maybe I SHOULD try not-so-thick lines.