This looks really sharp! I like it. You may want to add some shadow (I see the hair shadow already) on the skin and hair tones to define features. Also, if you want to make smoother lines use the Pen or Airbrush tools, though your pencil looks very nice already. The art programs really give you a lot of power + features to work with.
The mouth is off, if you're attempting an anime style. Or realism, for that matter. The lines of the lips, teeth, etc aren't parallel with your chin and stuff. The sword also looks pretty small, unless its in the background.
The hair is also done oddly, without the shading and highlights... as p3n stated. The hair's shadow though, would not be that opaque or rounded.
I think this is tiyan's style, and it looks pretty neat. I will say that layers help, and not using the line tools and fill tools as much will help. I know the shadow could definitely be that opaque, but it would probably match the hair, since it is the hair's shadow after all.
Shmoopy is right, the mouth is off, but the reason is because usually with anime the teeth don't always go right up to the line of the profile. It's sometimes pulled back a bit, and the lips are drawn in with the profile. I suggest watching anime and paying attention to how things are drawn, and the proportions, and the differences between the many styles of anime there are.
Hmm...shading, and intresting bg's help too. ^__^ But really, I like this pic, it has a boldness to it that I enjoy. Hope to see more from you.
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The hair is also done oddly, without the shading and highlights... as p3n stated. The hair's shadow though, would not be that opaque or rounded.
Good luck.
Shmoopy is right, the mouth is off, but the reason is because usually with anime the teeth don't always go right up to the line of the profile. It's sometimes pulled back a bit, and the lips are drawn in with the profile. I suggest watching anime and paying attention to how things are drawn, and the proportions, and the differences between the many styles of anime there are.
Hmm...shading, and intresting bg's help too. ^__^ But really, I like this pic, it has a boldness to it that I enjoy. Hope to see more from you.