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WerefoxLeBlanc
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WerefoxLeBlanc (Feb 26, 2003)
Music seems to be a prevalent element in my art. Hm.

Well, you cought Marrow dancing. He likes to put on his headphones and dance like a fool when he's alone, but he's too shy and insecure to do so in front of anyone else. He goes to clubs with friends but never goes out onto the floor.

I like the BG. Lyrics by Garbage, "I'm only happy when it rains"
WerefoxLeBlanc (Feb 26, 2003)
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Knockoff (edited Feb 27, 2003)
This is cool. I like your style.
WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)
See, I go to art collage. and every time we do something, it gets put up for critique. And we're not allowed to say "I like that" or "That's nice." If we do, the professor asks us what I'm about to ask you:

Why do you like it? What about it do you like?
Kazukie (edited Feb 27, 2003)
All my art teachers say that.. =P They wanna know what's good and what's bad and what I would change and blah blah..
WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)
Well, what's the point of feedback if you don't get anything from it? Personally, Even ONE precise comment ("Like your coloring" or whatever) is infinitly more satisfying than 1000 "Tha's nice" comments. I know it's nice. I wanna know why.

As for my style... How much more vague can you get? Might as well say "I like the cut of your jib."
UppityCracker (edited Feb 27, 2003)
Ok, you want a critique? Here we go..
The character design is weak, it is sloppy and unpolished. If you really want to define the character do a few detail sketches of body parts, such as the face. Your "style" needs to be defined more.. I mean is your character floating in space or standing? Space is very important in placing the whole scene.
What IS good about it though is that you have a form and an idea, and I'm sure in your mind it is alot clearer.
Just keep practicing man, practice makes perfect. Don't let the shit that I say get to you. Take it as constructive criticism
I don't mean to judge it too much, and art is art, if you mean it to be a sketch then forget what I say. Keep practicing on human form, like how a person stands and the movement of legs and arms. I know my stuff isnt perfect and need to work on it alot more.. ok, i'll stop now.
WerefoxLeBlanc (edited Feb 27, 2003)
Dont' let it get to me? Lessons already learned. That which does not kill me, et all.

If I DIDNT want a crit, I wouldn't post. Thanks.
darkk_angel (edited Mar 28, 2003)
Good idea, but the lineart is a tad bit messy.... if you cleaned it up a tad bit and added more shadows and color to the picture, and a better background it would be awesome.
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