forumsthe post boardA site I made.
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Fin_beast (edited Sep 15, 2004)
I am pretty proud of this. It's my second flash website.
My dad's company wanted a website and I said i'd do it. He's giving me some money for it. :)
I only put it up tonight and I was very rushed so there may be a problem or two.
Any feedback would be nice.
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marcello (Sep 15, 2004)
I'd speed up those fades. The point is to read the content, not throw the user through fancy effects.
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Axil62 (edited Sep 15, 2004)
Very nice. A lot of people tend to over do things with flash because it's so "cool" but this is nice and clean. Your dad should be proud.
Edit: Marcello is right though, the fades are a little slow.
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kejoco (edited Sep 15, 2004)
Looks pretty good...
only a few things i might change...
first, the fade in text looks cool but doesn't really serve a purpose. you have to remember the reason for the site, and thats to inform people who the company is and what they do. Its a serious business so you really want to get this info across as fast and easily as possible. Peoples attention spans are fairly short so you want to get the information available to them fast. the fade in can then be a bit of an annoyance.
the only other thing and its pretty minor is the button noise is a bit sharp, might want to replace it with something thats a little more muted...if anything at all. Sounds can be kind of cool and all but again, they can be a bit of an annoyance. I know you can always turn the sound off but most people don't want to have to do that.
Other than that the site looks good...nice simple design concept. all the information is all presented well and easily found.
One other thing you might want to incorprate is if the company has a logo you might want that present somewhere on the page at all times, even if its just the company name
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staci (Sep 15, 2004)
neat!
as a non programmer type person i say..good job.
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Xodiak (Sep 15, 2004)
It looks professional, great job! <:D
|XOD|
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davincipoppalag (Sep 15, 2004)
Looks good to me too fin! I know nothing about these things but this looks great.
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Fin_beast (edited Sep 28, 2004)
Here's another site that I made a while back. :)

http://www.mary-smith-translations.co.uk

It's for a small translation and interpretaion company in Aberdeen (Scotland).
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Ceido (Oct 17, 2006)
pwnd. My dad had it re-designed professionaly after a year.
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davincipoppalag (Oct 17, 2006)
Damn good work Fin..I don't know anything about how it's done..but that looks professional to me
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Ceido (Oct 18, 2006)
heh I didn't do that one dave. It was done by a professional company. I made one about a year ago for him and he paid me so, s'all good really.
 
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