boardsbeginnerFlame of Hope <Unfinished>
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drawn in 44 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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spoiledvamp27 (Sep 9, 2004)
I want some comments. I haven't been on here very long. What can I do to make my pic better?
spoiledvamp27 (Sep 9, 2004)
drawn in 28 min
Sutafani (Sep 9, 2004)
well I don't know how to make you pic better.... but I'd say it looks pretty good.
emmamommalag (Sep 9, 2004)
It looks very good but the candle could use some sharpening up, especially around the top of it.
spoiledvamp27 (Sep 9, 2004)
drawn in 4 min
blah..... better?
Ty854 (Sep 9, 2004)
i wouldnt really call that a "Flame", but this is really cool nonetheless.
davincipoppalag (Sep 9, 2004)
It's a decent start but the best way to tell you what to do is to show you Anna's candle http://www.cellosoft.com/2draw/view/26338/ its in the showcase too
DeadlyBlondeArcher (Sep 9, 2004)
All you need is more definition... around the edges, mostly, and that will bring out your subject. It keeps it from being blurry. Don't blend too much and don't touch the blur thingy till you've been here a long time. Yep, stay away from the blur tool. It's very good for a first one...
damnskippytakn-a-break (Sep 9, 2004)
I love this! I think you did a very nice job. I love the way the candle has been snuffed and I just blew out a candle and the smoke does come off thick like this! Very, very nicely done! Welcome to 2Draw! ' }
spoiledvamp27 (Sep 12, 2004)
drawn in 11 min
Grr! I keep trying to make it look better, and only suceed in making it look worse. :-p Grr.. I'm such a newbie.
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