nice already.. try to use lines of almost white, or extremely lightyellow on some places, it makes it look more real.. atleast i think so.. and blend them.
thats what you always say knockoff XD. this does look nice and as the both of them said, add more colors than just red and yellow, white in the concentrated spots and such. nice so far ^_^
*cracks up* believe me, im no god. feels nice to be looked up to though. thanks p3ndragon. whens your birthday? (seeing as you posted nothing on your userlookup)
edit: it would look better with more definition. Just taking away the lineart isnt going to do much. seeing as fire is a light source im alittle torn with the constructive critisizem but i think forground should be lighter than background. so the fire in the front should be lighter shades of red, yellow etc. while the back, not 'too' much but alittle darker so you can tell that some is in front and some in back. Define the edges abit while your at it so its sharp and not so blurry... erasers are good.
::giggle:: Believe me, p3ndragon- I know Urei, she -isn't- a god.
^_^ I kid.
It -is- quite good. I can't give any criticism that hasn't been given to you already.
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edit: it would look better with more definition. Just taking away the lineart isnt going to do much. seeing as fire is a light source im alittle torn with the constructive critisizem but i think forground should be lighter than background. so the fire in the front should be lighter shades of red, yellow etc. while the back, not 'too' much but alittle darker so you can tell that some is in front and some in back. Define the edges abit while your at it so its sharp and not so blurry... erasers are good.
^_^ I kid.
It -is- quite good. I can't give any criticism that hasn't been given to you already.
drawn in 16 min