This is very nice, for a first post. The pose is pretty good, though her arms get kinda skinny in places, and her torso gets a little excessively thin as well. Eyes are very nice, but I think her head is a wee bit too big. Lineart isn't bad (I <3 solids), but it's a little scratchy in places, and there are ghosty white pixels around the edges that can be cleaned up pretty easily. Eyes are very pretty, and I like her expression.

So yeah, welcome to 2draw.

...but c'mon, can you really manage to spell 'first' as 'frist' twice? In the title and in the description?