i doubt you care even a little, and it's not like i know much better, but i think it'd be "ga," not "wa." but like i said... not like i'd know a whole lot better.
anyway, on to critique-ing. (critiquing? critiqueing? cri---ah, screw it.) me gusta your lineart, although you might want to try thinning it out in places with the eraser. it is nice and smooth though. your shading's improving; it's obvious you're thinking about dark and light and facial curves and blah, so don't worry, you'll just keep on getting better. i like the hair, it's shiny. and now to my favorite part, the little teardrop thingy. it's so shiny! and blue! and shiny! very cool stuff. you should try some water-type realism, maybe draw a glass of water or a puddle or something... i dunno, i just want to see you give realism a shot some time cuz i bet you could be good at it. okay, that's my critique and i'm sticking to it.
Thanks Miki, that made my day. I'll try the things you suggested, and perhaps some realism eventually too, it would be nice after all, lol.
And you may very well be right in saying its ga, cause watashi wa means 'I am' or just 'I' (which you of course know), so I just replaced Kimi 'you' with watashi for watashi wa kataze which is 'I win'. So it...probably is actually correct as ga.
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anyway, on to critique-ing. (critiquing? critiqueing? cri---ah, screw it.) me gusta your lineart, although you might want to try thinning it out in places with the eraser. it is nice and smooth though. your shading's improving; it's obvious you're thinking about dark and light and facial curves and blah, so don't worry, you'll just keep on getting better. i like the hair, it's shiny. and now to my favorite part, the little teardrop thingy. it's so shiny! and blue! and shiny! very cool stuff. you should try some water-type realism, maybe draw a glass of water or a puddle or something... i dunno, i just want to see you give realism a shot some time cuz i bet you could be good at it. okay, that's my critique and i'm sticking to it.
And you may very well be right in saying its ga, cause watashi wa means 'I am' or just 'I' (which you of course know), so I just replaced Kimi 'you' with watashi for watashi wa kataze which is 'I win'. So it...probably is actually correct as ga.