accually thats kinda sketchy. not bad. try some shading though. (more)

I think this is fantastic, iron :) You have a nice style.

Atually Sephiroth, That is A type of shading and she doesn't need any more.
Nice job though. This is pretty snazzy.

Man, I love this. It doesn't need anymore work, and the style is fantastic. ^___^ Great job. Mad halftone skillz.

It is sketchy, I know. I just don't feel ready to try blurring á la photorealism yet... :) But Sephiroth is right, it does need more shadows. Less midtones. Or something.

I think this is very good. If I were to say anything constructive, it would be a little more contrast between the cup and the table is all.

yeah i know riku but he asked 4 constructive critisisum so i made something up.

Thats F-ed up.

whatever. Yeah u dont need no shading alright? happy?

I like this style just how it is. Before I'm fully awake, my morning cup of coffee looks a little like that sometimes.

This is wonderful. I love the textures. Very nice drawing

Shading, no shading... Style and/or realism. Could go either way, really. In this case it kind of ended up somewhere halfway between the two, mainly because I couldn't make up mu mind. And I haven't decided yet what style to go for the next time... :)

sorry I guess it's better than I could do (duh)

Hey, no need to apologise - like you said, I did ask for criticism! :)