This piece of work is all right, but it could use a bit of editing. I like how you added volume to the clouds, and it's greatly visible ^_^. However, this volume -if spread- would've done miracles to the current picture, although its state now isn't too bad either. The girl is good, and I like how her hair flows because of the wind; however, I think you made it too stiff... and maybe you should add ripples in the sky to signify the wind... that'll be awesome. The eyes' color really suits the girl, although they shouldn't be so big. And look at that: the dress is almost the same as the one I drew for my first (and only *sniff*) oekaki! Cool! Except yours has a hood, which may make it better -_-;;. The sleeves add a great touch to the outfit, although the lines should be connected. And the hand could've been a little more detailed, too... I think that you should put more flowers (or decoration) to the ground... as well as the main bg itself. The color of the sky could be intensified, and the color of the grass could be more vivid. Plus, the picture would come more alive if you touch it with shading. There are a lot that can be improved... but the picture is nice to look at ^_^.