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sal (Jun 2, 2004)
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sal (Jun 2, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 19 min
mx (edited Jun 2, 2004)
Hi Sal(how you?)

I like the depth of perspective you created by using the blend of yellow to black for the mountains. It makes the mountains look further. I also like the use of "orange-pink" and "blue-purple" as complimentaries for the sky.
More focus is needed on enhancing the flower. I suggest that the flower goes lighter or darker than the yellow. At the moment it seems to much as the same contrast as the yellow sand. The flower is your focal point and needs to be enhanced. (your grass seems a little more focused than the flower and it should maybe be the other way around).Some outlining to give the flower and leaves
definition, might work. Maybe try repeating some of the purples and blues that u have for the sky to enhance it whilst making the flower still fit in. Nice overeall style of your galleries:-)
go well :)
mx
davincipoppalag (Jun 2, 2004)
Yea sal.. I like it.. mx is right about making the flower brighter.
sal (Jun 2, 2004)
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davincipoppalag (Jun 2, 2004)
That's an improvement.. maybe some lighter highlights on the edges of the flower too, to make it stand out even more?
sal (Jun 2, 2004)
ty 4 the comments guys, but i have no more space and i dont think its really worth askin 4 more...
Kenshin (Jun 2, 2004)
Nice. I like it. I like the prink sky. THe flower is beautiful.

.°:Kenshin:°.
mx (Jun 9, 2004)
great improvement Sal...especially the flower and its leaves etc. :-)
The flower fits in better with the rest of the picture now because of the repitition of the sky`s colour.
the flowers "branch/stem"(sorry dont know the word now) looks quite 3d now as well. I like the looseness of the way youve done it.
go well
mx
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