This is very nice, very clean. Love the reflectivity of the wineglass and tray. The hand seems like it has two thumbs, though, and looks a little cartoony in comparison with the tray.
I'm glad you commented Zack... I want the constructive criticism so I can improve. When doing this, I was pleased with how the glass and tray came out... then it all went downhill with the hand. I'm not really sure how to make it look realistic. Suggestions? Also.. I'm not seein' the second thumb. lol Wanna point it out to me? I appreciate your help :) ty *hugs*
I'm no expert by any measure, but here goes. In terms of figure, the pinky finger seems to be the problem. Try holding a magazine or book with your right hand in this kind of position. Unless you're extremely flexible, the pinky doesn't naturally stretch so far away from the next finger--thus, when looked at a certain way, the pinky resembles a second thumb. If you would like to keep the pinky where it is, you'll want to slant the real thumb (heheh) to the right instead of to the left, and shift the next finger down from the pinky slightly to the left. The thumb would then be overlapping most of that finger.
The shading isn't a problem per se, but it would probably help if you used the shading to make the hand have more depth instead of outline it.
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I'm no expert by any measure, but here goes. In terms of figure, the pinky finger seems to be the problem. Try holding a magazine or book with your right hand in this kind of position. Unless you're extremely flexible, the pinky doesn't naturally stretch so far away from the next finger--thus, when looked at a certain way, the pinky resembles a second thumb. If you would like to keep the pinky where it is, you'll want to slant the real thumb (heheh) to the right instead of to the left, and shift the next finger down from the pinky slightly to the left. The thumb would then be overlapping most of that finger.
The shading isn't a problem per se, but it would probably help if you used the shading to make the hand have more depth instead of outline it.
Hope this helps!
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