Actually, it's not so bad , either. Maybe you could carry that stuff that looks like frosted glass all the way across the picture, and then it would look like you are seeing the girl in the shower as you look through the glass..the parts where that stuff overlaps the figure now look like that, and they look pretty good to me.
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