i'm a very first time visitor here, and although i don't have a clue on what makes a drawing good or not, and even though i can't give you any poiinters and my opinion isn't professional at all;
I LOVE THIS DRAWING !
I can't put it any different, i really love it, it speaks to me (in a language i don't understand ;) )
Would you mind if i print this out and hang it in my room or something ?
Keep up the good work!