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Pandora (Apr 9, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 51 min

scarfeh (Apr 9, 2004)

Basicly,the water is your only problem.It's solid,and it should have more colors blending in.It also should have reflections.And...wavy-ness.I think dodging is a nice tool to use for the water.

davincipoppalag (Apr 9, 2004)

I agree. This is a nice start. Put some colors and reflections in the water.. and some dodge/and burn highlights and shadows in the bushes and rocks and this will be very nice , indeed.

longway (Apr 9, 2004)

what a pleasant scene pandora, just a little reflection would set it off...i like the bushes, they look like early spring evergreen's here.

DMV (Apr 9, 2004)

i agree with everyone ... since you only have 2 colors in the bushes it makes it looks undone. but I like it:) it looks nice

Hedwiga (Apr 9, 2004)

It's a very nice piece. You've set a place in my mind very well. About the water, I agree it could use something, perhaps just around where it meets the ground.

Pandora (Apr 9, 2004)
drawn in 23 min

longway (Apr 9, 2004)

hey i like that, nice work pandora!!

davincipoppalag (Apr 9, 2004)

Now you're talkin!

scarfeh (Apr 10, 2004)

Yay for Pandora!