its ok... the head looks abit small, body too big.... and the neck looks very wide... the left arm looks funky also... the hair looks good.. could do with some shading/highlights... bg looks abit crappy... too simple.... u could put maybe a forrest or somethin behind her...

X_X;; I hate my mouse... and, all of my first attempts to do ANYTHING are always putrid... o.o

To Rikku: Thanks! ^_^
To Sal: Yeah... I also noticed all that stuff... *sighs* but... it is my first attempt... and, I use a mouse for pete's sake!! ^_^;;

i use a shitty £9 rollarball mouse... its no excuse really...

You do?!? I use a mouse also. I've got one of those laser rollers. It has no ball but a little red light that sensors when you move It.

I have a mouse like Rikku's.

She... looks like a very heavyweight championship winner Yuna.

You've done good to bring out all the little detail her clothes have, but in the process you've forgot the check up on that anatomy once in a while.

The colour of the background makes me feel trippy in a very bad way, as with that name right there. Next time you draw humans, try to remember the aspects of shoulders, ribcage, head etc., especially compared to each other.

I know... but... this ain't really an excuse... but, this is my first attemp trying to draw something like this... I didn't pay attention to the atonomy at all... |': I apologize...

why do people call them laser rollers? If they really had lasers in them, they'd cost twice as much and you'd die every time you looked at the bottom.
They're just a freaking red light. LED LIGHT.
but seriously, a mouse isn't an excuse.

yea, I have a crappy mouse, its not even a led light.
Just a plain ball mouse, that need to be cleaned soonn.....

MROW!! I KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA DO!! I'm gonna give it another try! Me and this... uh... led light mouse are going to work together and DRAW THIS PICTURE RIGHT!! MWA HAH HAH HAH HEH!!! What? I just said that I was going to try this again.

cool i like it alot

PinkuEspeon is my other account on 2draw. I don't use it anymore... I use this one now. Go and look at my first submittion on this one! ^_^

Pinku/Kiwi, in case you may pop back by this account - the mouse is not an excuse.. I use an LED mouse, and if you'll check out my (2.. heh... *cough*) drawings, they are both done in mouse.. my very first and second oekakis... never had done this before...