Very poetic. The eyes would look better, if the lashes weren't so fuzzy. Next time you should use the pen-tool instead of pencil? Also, the small, skin-coloured bits around the eyes kinda poke in the eye. (heh-heh.)
Actually Neko, it could just be a view of the eyelids from below where you can see some of the skin that is behind the eyelashes, so it's not weird at all I think.
Getting into the poetry theme, eh^^?Like the idea and the poem itself XD.Too bad my screen name is so messed up you couldn't even make it into a quote that made sense^^;.Well, at least you got an icon now, right :)?And it's an original too so that makes it yet one better.Nice job^^.
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Nice glowing effect, though.
Getting into the poetry theme, eh^^?Like the idea and the poem itself XD.Too bad my screen name is so messed up you couldn't even make it into a quote that made sense^^;.Well, at least you got an icon now, right :)?And it's an original too so that makes it yet one better.Nice job^^.