the sketch is lovely. and im certainly not the best qualified to help...but one suggestion i will make is one that everyone told me...make the contrast of colors more distinct. thatll help shading in general...hair, skin, clothes...yea. but nice job. i like :)
I appreciate your comment and your helpful advice. I think the sketch is better than the final result... <more distinct contrast> ok I'll try this next time!
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