Maybe not intermediate-worthy 'yet'.. The one thing you could do is clean up your lineart. I understand that this is only the first version, but keep that in mind.. Also, the proportions could be edited up a bit (and by that, I mean 'fixed'). If you'd like an example of how you could do this, tell me and I'll show you. It looks good so far, but there's still room to improve. Good luck (and take what I said into consideration, it will help you).
Ya should have stuck with the girl!!! I hate to say it, but this new drawing kind of sux0rz... No offense... *hopes fervently that she didnt offend the artist*... I dunno... The design seems as if it should now be in the beginners section....
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