rikku: You should probably avoid critiquing until your own pieces improve...
I disagree with you on all points here, adding color probably would detract from the piece. As for perspective, that's hard to say, the picture is not really in focus so it is hard to say what is in perspective.
The nose could probably use some work, it somewhat resembles a very flat alien face similar to jabba the hutt's. Perhaps more definition on the upper part of the nose, and less on the nostrils would help.
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I disagree with you on all points here, adding color probably would detract from the piece. As for perspective, that's hard to say, the picture is not really in focus so it is hard to say what is in perspective.
The nose could probably use some work, it somewhat resembles a very flat alien face similar to jabba the hutt's. Perhaps more definition on the upper part of the nose, and less on the nostrils would help.