I think it looks ok except for the nose lori. Maybe smooth out the hair? Looks a bit like brown spaghetti.

Just a little criticism sorry.

I think it's beautiful, especially the mouth and eyes.

She has my long brown hair. Very pretty in the handling of the colors and brushstrokes.

thanks all of you

no problem sexy cat.

One birthday my parents bought me a pair of flip flops with matchbox cars sellotaped to the bottom, bloody cheapskates.

except in the photo, the eyes are looking right at the camera... not off to the side

Nice structure to the face.

lori! so good!

thanks you two