David is right, this needs a lot more work and did you intend to put the moutn just below the eye?

For intermediate i think it could use some work...that being said..i dont mind the abstract misplacement of the lips or the overly large eyes...i like the style and the coloring done so far....i think you have potential...not thT i'm some great artist or anything trying to judge you..cause i'm not..just offering some advice.

No, I love the C&C :D And yes, the lips are intended to be there :). I wasnt going for too realistic but I am trying to be alot more loose in my work, although I do agree on that it probably should have been submitted on the beginner board, I actually intended to make something good but oh well... theres always tomorrow.