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loserxnextdoor (Nov 23, 2003)

I'm not done ^^; But uh It's going to be a picture of a quote I have. It'll be on there later. Please cirtique! I need help >_>: ._.!!!!!!

loserxnextdoor (Nov 23, 2003)
drawn in 1 hour 39 min

Five (Nov 23, 2003)

Uhm, there's just one rose in a corner, so not much to critique on. If you would post your quote and maybe your plans on what you are planning to draw, then we could give you opinions.

loserxnextdoor (Nov 23, 2003)

I meant critque the rose ^_~;

Zinc (Nov 23, 2003)

Outline of it looks rough.. if that helped any. The stem looks irregular though. It's skinny and thick in the wrong places. The stem part between the two leaves is skinny..

mikhail (Nov 23, 2003)

i like the texture on the rose

elana (Nov 24, 2003)

I like the rose, but maybe the stem shouldn't bend so much near the bottom. So much empty space!Grr! heehee, cant wait to see the finished product!

loserxnextdoor (Nov 26, 2003)
drawn in 25 min

Just added a few stuff. I'm really busy ._.