2draw.net - boards - Intermediate

pencilhero (Apr 14, 2009)

Man its hard to make a comic with mouse lol XD
Can u believe i spend 20 mins for the dialogs i guess thats what it means to be in an "Writer Block"
The comic actually its a football comic lol XD
the next pages might improve if i "acctually" get my tablet back "from the awesome service" they have.
Anyway i hope to get my tablet before 2012 ^__^
thats all folks >_<

pencilhero (Apr 14, 2009)
drawn in 48 min

davincipoppalag (Apr 14, 2009)

I hope you get it back before your hand turns into a claw!

Axil62 (edited Apr 14, 2009)

If I may be so bold as to suggest some changes in your dialogue.
It needs to flow and be properly punctuated.

Frame 1. "This story begins with Michael, a college man who leads a rather interesting life."
Frame 2. "Michael is having quite a year, his best yet. Good grades, a house and a position as center forward on the football team."

Remember, good dialogue can carry mediocre/poor artwork in a comic, good artwork almost never carries bad dialogue.
(I've already edited this dialogue 3 times)

Just a suggestion.

pencilhero (Apr 14, 2009)

Your right XD i ll edit it later XD
lol i am really bad at english :-p

pencilhero (Apr 14, 2009)
drawn in 10 min

all credits go to axil62 for posting the corrected dialog
thanks man ^___^

firecracker (Apr 14, 2009)

Very cute comic strip.....I hope you add more! I used to read tons of comic books when I was a kid.....:)

Axil62 (Apr 14, 2009)

No P R A blamando!

pencilhero (Apr 14, 2009)

pienso que usted lo mecanografió incorrecto O____o

Bubblicious (edited Apr 14, 2009)

Wha dont understand what you are saying o.O ANYWAY, cool! And 'Writer's block' is a pain in the ass, seriously. Scuz' my french, but it is! Trust me, try pulling out a 5 thousand word chapter for a story out of your ass... -_-

backmagicwoman (Apr 15, 2009)

Geez..can u imagine the paper cuts you would have.ouch!