I think you did a good job! Shults, it depends on weather you are refering to her left or your left. As I am looking at it her left eye looks fine. The eye on the right is the one that looks weird. There is no eyelid and it's larger than the other eye. But basically it was very well drawn. ;o)
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-Only thing that's weird is her left eyelid..
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