this is adorible and I wish i had your line art and coloring abilities

YOUR Giving ME advice.I see nothing wrong with my picture other than the fact that I forgot to erase some orange on her left foot[from her point of view its left]

dont take it as in insult sai its only his,...or her view on your drawing :)

I wasn't trying to be an ass, but you're being a jerk.

I am not being a jerk,If I said to you was offencive,I was being modest

Actually, you have to be able to take criticism.

There IS something wrong with how the girl is wrapped around the guy, her legs are almost the same length in the front, and facing the same way, so unless she was trying really hard to bend her ankle to the front, it wouldn't work out.
I'm assuming she's sort of sitting on his back

Also, your characters lack balance, it looks like they'll topple over.

I can Take the criticism,I personally wasent trying very haard on the picture >.<

That's not an excuse to snap at people :\

We can't read your mind either, so there's no way we'd know you weren't "trying very hard" on the picture.

I wasennt snaping at anyone,just irritated this week.I have no idea what it is, driving school,regular school preparation or finding a job, all this is so stressful.
But If I hurt anyone, I appologize,just so stressed.

and such things make me glad im 12 =p