Not bad. I like the pose, and the design of the costume. The white lines around the lineart is pixellated and distracting. I would recommend smoothing them out, or eliminating them entirely. Great idea, I like the pose!
Ohh, black and white--Impossible for me to do. I think the pose is nifty, and her costume is * C U T E *
Her hand is half-holding a stick, though.... maybe close her fingers a little tighter, there? Unless, of course, that was intentional... There are no right answers in art, just opinions. (Can't remember where I got that from, but it's a real butt-saver when offering criticism!)
All in all, a nice picture, reminds me of those tight-rope walkers in travelling cirques. ^_^
I highly highly recommend you stay away from the fill button unless absolutely necessary because it will cause those little rough white lines and makes it look grainy. If you want lines to stand out against black you can try doing them in a dark grey then use the layers to color underneath! This is a very cute piece-keep it up!
Her hand is half-holding a stick, though.... maybe close her fingers a little tighter, there? Unless, of course, that was intentional... There are no right answers in art, just opinions. (Can't remember where I got that from, but it's a real butt-saver when offering criticism!)
All in all, a nice picture, reminds me of those tight-rope walkers in travelling cirques. ^_^