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Tresspasses (Aug 12, 2005)
This is taking a lot longer than I expected it to!
Gotta run for now...
9 comments – latest 4:
hideyourface (Aug 15, 2005)
it's not intermediate cause it's not good enough :)
Tresspasses (Aug 15, 2005)
Yes, but what could be improved without losing the feel of the piece. Saying it is not good enough is exactly the same as saying it is not of intermediate quality, an opinion with no helpful comments to back it up.

A helpful comment would be something like "the shadows could use more depth"

I know that there are some very good artists on these boards, and I would appreciate some constructive comments.
hideyourface (Aug 15, 2005)
I wrote something long, but I accidently went back a page while writing it.. Basically, the picture is small. Small pictures are good as long as they have detail. Allthe buildings/walls lack textures and detail. The fence/buildings would probably be just as dark as the person since the light is coming from behind. Maybe a street light by the person would make it look better.
Tresspasses (edited Aug 16, 2005)
Thanks for the comments hideyourface :)

I was trying for a the world outside your windows type of thing, with the shadowy nature and fuzziness. The person is not supposed to be a person, but rather a shadow of the past... Obviously I was unable to portray this meaning with my drawing. I will give some though as to how to better get that point across.

Too bad the long post was lost, I would have really enjoyed seeing it.

Thanks again, and if anybody else has some comments I'd really like to hear them.
drawn in 5 hours 44 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Public Boards/Beginner 
Tresspasses (Mar 1, 2005)
just trying to draw some more interesting poses.
3 comments – latest 4:
Tresspasses (Mar 6, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 27 min
Hey...when's everybody else coming?
Shanghai (Mar 6, 2005)
It's always good to try out new poses. Personally I like to use anatomy books for reference, though even clothing magazines can work well. I think you've pulled their elbow a little too far behind them though so it's almost touching their spine, which is sort of giving the impression of us not being sure right from the start which side is the front. It looks like they're in either a movie theater or maybe just their living room on a couch.
featherstone (edited Mar 6, 2005)
hey that's a cool pose... it says to me, "you're behind me, but I'll contort myself so we can talk" :) maybe you should title it "conversational contortion" :P
Tresspasses (Mar 8, 2005)
redpanda> Thanks for the tips. I know something looked odd, but wasn't sure quite what.

featherstone> I like that title, thanks for the laugh.
drawn in 2 hours 33 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Tresspasses (Feb 13, 2005)
Why does everybody run from me?
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Tresspasses (Feb 19, 2005)
drawn in 2 hours 1 min
Lascaux sketch and I don't get along...it is definitely not built for a Mac...
davincipoppalag (Feb 19, 2005)
Because you look like a ...-gasp!- MIME>>>run!!!
spiritdweller (Feb 24, 2005)
MIME... omg.. lol... get outta the box!
drawn in 3 hours 46 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Tresspasses (Feb 1, 2005)
It was short, but I loved it. Thank you for sharing your life with me.
3 comments – latest 3:
Pantera (Feb 1, 2005)
Awww so sorry to hear that ((Tress))
emmamommalag (Feb 1, 2005)
Awww. I'm sorry too, Dawn. Nice little picture you've made for a tribute.
koisnake (Feb 2, 2005)
Cute sheep...thing
drawn in 26 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Public Boards/Intermediate 
Tresspasses (Jan 18, 2005)
exactly what the title says - used a reference for the dog...and looked at many pictures to get an idea for the background.
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Tresspasses (Jan 22, 2005)
drawn in 34 min
getting there...
Tresspasses (Jan 22, 2005)
drawn in 28 min
Need another break...
Tresspasses (Jan 22, 2005)
drawn in 2 hours 14 min
I didn't plan to put this in intermediate, but ran out of space on begginer... I hope this is okay here.
ZaKi_nii-san (Jan 22, 2005)
Dude, awesome job on the coloring. The background is simply amazing. Great work
drawn in 6 hours 19 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Public Boards/Beginner 
Tresspasses (Jan 18, 2005)
just blowing off steam...thought it was kind of neat...
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drawn in 19 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Tresspasses (Jan 12, 2005)
I'm just a little unwell...animation!
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drawn in 17 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Tresspasses (Jan 2, 2005)
A picture of Narumi Ayumu from spiral. Character belongs to Kyou Shirodaira. Many different images were viewed during the creation of this one.
3 comments – latest 3:
The_Chosen (Jan 2, 2005)
i wana see spiral it looks good & Eyes is hot!
squee (Jan 2, 2005)
This is awesome! :D
mukumuku (Jan 2, 2005)
this is great! loverly drawing. hes sexy
drawn in 1 hour 36 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
Tresspasses (Dec 31, 2004)
The cyclops week sounded fun, so here's my addition. A young cylcops, all made up for a night on the town.
3 comments – latest 3:
Xodiak (Dec 31, 2004)
Xod wants to kiss her so much until I pass out... I hope she does not find me ugly... <:/
|XOD|
davincipoppalag (Dec 31, 2004)
Good news XODDY. She is single,, and she only has eye for you.
Tresspasses (Dec 31, 2004)
I'm sure she won't find you ugly XOD...but she may be intimidated by all the people fighting over you in the forums!
drawn in 1 hour 5 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Tresspasses (Dec 30, 2004)
I always have trouble with the 3/4 view...
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Tresspasses (Dec 30, 2004)
drawn in 21 min
time for dinner
Chezas_Place (Dec 30, 2004)
ew...he looks ew.......NASTY *points at him* HES A RETARD!!
Kenshin (Dec 30, 2004)
...what the heck? I think you did pretty well! I like the hair. I wish mine was that color XD
Tresspasses (Dec 31, 2004)
Thanks Kenshin, I've always wanted hair that colour too.

Chezas Place>not retarded, just grumpy and about to throw a temper tantrum.
drawn in 2 hours 40 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
 
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