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firefight (Mar 27, 2005)

took alot of bluring and sharpening

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StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Whoah. Nice colours. I think you should've done something with the background instead of leaving it just white like that. Otherwise, it's kinda spiffy.

redyellowblue (Mar 31, 2005)

i like the color combinations, props.. RYB

first try

firefight (Mar 27, 2005)

my first try

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hideyourface (Mar 27, 2005)

If you're using the applets for the first time I think the only tools you should consider using are the pen, soften, and eraser.

firefight (Mar 27, 2005)

your right but i have a friend helpin me out who has been using the appalet for some time now so hes showing me the ropes. thanks for your advice.

renire (Mar 27, 2005)

wow! thats amzing for your first try!!!!!

StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

if you're still getting used to the applets, I suggest spending more time trying to figure it out =)

Wha?!

Saiyanangie (Mar 30, 2005)

Wtf? It's nice, in my eyes... but I don't know why or what...

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StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Whatever it is, it's very cute in a creepy kind of way.

TaCO (Mar 30, 2005)

O.O Coolness It's a fury dog Ghost!!!!

Horse's Eye

HorseyLaura (Mar 30, 2005)

This was my first drawing here. It's pretty much just a horse's eye and part of the face.

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StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Welcome to 2draw then ^_^ I hope you get used to the applets!

renire (Mar 31, 2005)

thats wicked 4 ur first drawing! welcome ^_^

Gothic Lolita

ILoveKenshin and xswirvex (Feb 28, 2005)

yay. I need to fix it.

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Pence (Mar 13, 2005)

I love the coloring and lineart and i can't wait to see it done.

ILoveKenshin (edited Mar 30, 2005)

Very nice colouring, and extremely smooth lineart... I wish I could do that. >_> Kinda looks like a pirate. o_o Thanks for the collab. ^_^

StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Man how do you get so clean, smooth lineart?! Gosh thats amazing.

Noremac (Mar 30, 2005)

ooooh kitty lady... i think i will hump this one

???

The_Chosen (Mar 30, 2005)

I have no idea why i drew this......but! it was fun ^_^

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StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Very nice, soft colours =D I love the background.

Cacau (Mar 30, 2005)

I love the lineart and the colouring. BUt I think that the lineart is a bit blurry in some parts. Great job ;D

Poor Jenny

renire (Mar 30, 2005)

a sad story that goes with the picture:

Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.

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renire (edited Mar 31, 2005)

ok....ok...ok.......SHEESH......oh and thanks chezas ^_^........its not my fault im stupid at drawings, and im sorry about this whole thing......*hides away in corner*

oh and childlike.......ITS A BACKGROUND U DIV

Childlike_Vampire (Apr 1, 2005)

I is Child, not Childlike....what's a DIV? O_o

renire (Apr 4, 2005)

div, divvy or whatever, it means you are stupid and childish.

Childlike_Vampire (Apr 15, 2005)

Well...OH NO YOU CALLED ME CHILDISH that's the last thing I was going for with the whole CHILDLIKE thing...gaspeth to no end.
But I know I'm not stupid so that doesn't offend me either. It was nice of you to try though!
_{(psst your picture still sucks maybe you could put as much effort into your drawings as you do into your comebacks...oh wait they would still suck.)}

OKAY...I'm sorry. That was the mean-ness side of me, now how about....you are obviously young, and this is actually a cute drawing. I think the girl is very cute and she looks very sad and lonely. (I refuse to read the story by the way I'm afraid it might be a bad sad story.) I just was trying to inspire you to prove me wrong and do better. Maybe you will someday, I dunno. I just always am hoping people try harder around here all the time. It, like my ever present longing for a second childhood, will probably never happen. *shrug*

Mermaid Sonia the Hedgehog

Bluefoxxygurl212005 (Feb 4, 2005)

Yeah, that's a very obvious title, :3 I'll be finishing it soon!!!!!

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Bluefoxxygurl212005 (Mar 30, 2005)
drawn in 2 min

All done, enjoy!!!!! :3

renire (edited Mar 30, 2005)

nooooooice!

(by the way the sky inbetween her tummy and arm is a different coulor to the rest of the sky)

Bluefoxxygurl212005 (Apr 18, 2005)

In hun, sorry about that, I'll fix it right away! Thanks for the comment :hug:

Bluefoxxygurl212005 (Apr 18, 2005)
drawn in 21 sec

Just had to make a slight adjustment to the bg color under her tummy! :p

ftd

Eriatarka (Mar 30, 2005)

This is my first attempt at making ANYTHING at all... I didn't even know how to use the program and still don't .... oh woe is me.

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StrawberryYamichan (Mar 30, 2005)

Welcome to 2dra! I hope you will soon learn how to understand the applet. And if not, go onto something else. PaintBBs and Oekai Shi Painter are simpler than Lascaux (well to me anyways) so if you don't understand the applet you're using, try a new one!