The closed eye is waaay too low. Makes her look (please don't be offended) mutated. Just moving it up higher and more horizontal. Lower the chin line, round out the other eye and make it a little smaller maybe. And make the upper head smaller. Work a little more on the hair by smoothing out the lines. And just cleaning up the lines but using a thinner brush on a low opacity and flow. Just suggestions as you asked. Over all cute.

Just wanted to add the lips and nose is fine. Do not touch.

I know, I finish too fast xD

Another cute one, but as you look you see she's smoking, and that ain't good. As the smiles show the lower you go (nice touch) Your colors are very much like Do0p's and Punky's. Nice and bright yet neutral (does that make any sense?)

Im not sure if it does xD
oh and the smoking thing, It was an avi art request from someone
And I think this picture kinda sets a point, even the cutest thing could be a nightmare

Thanks Dave

Well this is pretty. Great lineart and coloring. I noticed two things though, one, a piece of her hair is see through and you covered the hand. Hands difficult for you? They are for most people.

The hands are difficult when they are no close up for meh

very cute! :3

well,thanks :)

yeah, but the problem is where am I gonna get the time to do that,I have no idea

Me neither.
But I enjoy your drawings very much. Keep drawing!

Thank you very much :3

Yes.

Nope

I love the eyes too~